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Dec 03, 2018DanglingConversations rated this title 2.5 out of 5 stars
Why oh why did the author take a perfectly good story and use this contrived form to write an unreadable novel? There are no periods and a few commas sprinkled through out the chapters. This is stream of consciousness at its worse. It helped when I flipped to the last 5 pages to get a grip on what was happening to the character, then I went back to read a bit more, but the jumble of thoughts without punctuation finally defeated me. This author is arrogant and oblivious to the comfort of his readers.